Talk:Lohmann Affair

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Scope creep in topic english level

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the english in this article is so abysmally bad it could really benefit from a native speaker (i am not one). is this machine translated from german? 193.90.163.117 (talk) 00:07, 2 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

@193.90.163.11: Your right. I wrote it, and I know. Why don't you have a go at fixing it, or better still copyediting it. scope_creepTalk 11:16, 2 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
@193.90.163.11: It is a partial translation. Most of it was taken from the CIA report of the same name. I'd be happy if you wanted to have a go at copyediting it. scope_creepTalk 11:22, 2 March 2021 (UTC)Reply