Talk:Liz Larin

Latest comment: 8 years ago by JohnInDC in topic Cleanup

Cleanup

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This article is poorly sourced and not very well organized, and suffers a bit from promotional spin. In coming days I'm going to try to beef it up (and pare it down) according to third party sources, which I'll track down and add. JohnInDC (talk) 10:58, 6 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

I've made some progress - found several sources, and included them; took out a bunch of unsourced material that had the wrong tone anyhow; added an "awards" section, in the form of a list rather than prose, and found appropriate sources (at least for the Detroit Music Awards). I think the article now far better lines up with what the sources say, with sources to support it. My next task will be to take the existing refs and place them more appropriately in the article. Also if I can find any others, which may say different things, I'll add them in. JohnInDC (talk) 15:45, 7 October 2016 (UTC)Reply