Talk:Live While We're Young/GA1
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Reviewer: Petergriffin9901 (talk · contribs) 02:11, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
Lead
- One Direction began recording the album in May 2012, in Stockholm, Sweden—"Live While We're Young" is a result of those recording sessions -> This could be worded better. I mean, if they recorded the album in Sweden, isn't it obvious that the song would've been recorded there as well?
Removed from lead. They began recording the album in Sweden that does not mean they recorded it entirely there. —AdabowtheSecond 18:35, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
- The song's accompanying music video leaked unauthorized -> leaked unauthorized isn't grammatically correct
Better? —AdabowtheSecond 18:35, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
- I think you should note that Bieber later surpassed them with "BAAB"
Done. —AdabowtheSecond 18:35, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
Background
- Try and substitute "One Direction" for "the band" sometimes. Keeps things fresh.
Done —AdabowtheSecond 18:35, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
Comment edit
It's been over a month since the reviewer has posted here. At this point, Robin, would you like to wait for a possible reviewer return, or send this nomination back in the pool so it can get picked up by another reviewer. Let me know your preference. (You can ping him on his page if you'd like; he hasn't been very active lately.) BlueMoonset (talk) 21:21, 13 January 2013 (UTC)
- Currently, I don't have a problem with it as I'm on a wikibreak myself. — Robin (talk) 00:38, 15 January 2013 (UTC)
- The reviewer has not edited on Wikipedia since January 9. Since this has been abandoned, the nominator has requested that this be put back into the reviewing pool in the hopes of finding a new reviewer, which I am doing now. BlueMoonset (talk) 00:45, 21 January 2013 (UTC)