Talk:Live Concert at the Forum/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Aoba47 in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 20:19, 4 April 2018 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox
- For this part (t was recorded at The Forum in Los Angeles on April 15, 1972, during), I do not believe that the comma between “1972” and “during” is really necessary.
- Done
- I would include information about the critical response in the lead.
- Done
- Please mark in the infobox that Richard Perry is the executive producer of the album.
- Done
- I have a question about this part (retitled Barbra Streisand Live in some countries). In the body of the article, you only say that the album was released under this name in Canada. Do you have sources for other countries?
- Done
- Background
- Please use Streisand’s full name on the first mention in the body of the article, and link it.
- Done
- I think that this part (The album's songs were recorded during the 4 for) is incomplete.
- Actually, that's just the name of the concert – maybe how I added apostrophes around it will help.
- Something about this sentence (During select live renditions, and to warn the public on the misuse of drugs and alcohol, the singer pretended as if she was under the influence of marijuana.) reads awkwardly to me, particularly the placement of the “and to warn the public on the misuse of drugs and alcohol” phrase.
- Done – Is it better how I worded it?
- For this part (Richard Perry solely and executively produced the album's eleven tracks), “eleven” should be represented as numbers.
- Done
- Singles
- For this sentence (Three singles were released from Live Concert at the Forum, all throughout 1972.), I do not believe that “all” is necessary here.
- Done
- Please link “Didn’t We” on its first use in the body of the article.
- Done
- Reception
- I think a topic sentence for the first paragraph would be helpful.
- Done
- Please link "People" and "Stoney End”.
- Done
- Please italicize Just for the Record... and include the periods at the end. Please include the year in which the album was released.
- Done
- Track listing
- I would make a note here about the producer.
- Done
- Final comments
- Great work with this article! Once my comments are addressed, I will pass this. Have a wonderful rest of your day/night! Aoba47 (talk) 02:56, 5 April 2018 (UTC)
- Verdict
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