Talk:Liv Tyler/GA1
Latest comment: 15 years ago by ThinkBlue in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
"Royston Langdon (2003-2008)" – requires an en dash per WP:DASH"trilogy (2001 - 2003), in" – en dash required here, and no spacesI think the image should be cropped to only show her upper body – perhaps from right below her right elbow, so that doesn't get cut off. Otherwise, it's long, vertically.- "After a brief hiatus" is a pretty short paragraph, but not much can be done there I suppose
"Personal life" is made up of too many short paragraphs. I suggest merging a few, expanding a few, etc. until they aren't as small, stubby paragraphs.Please let me know when that is done then I can take another look at it.Reference 2 needs to be formatted."born Liv Rundgren[1] at Mount Sinai Hospital" – remove the bold