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The music as Lisa falls toward the cake
editIt's very famous but I can't remember what it's called. It should probably be mentioned in the Cultural References section as well. 82.7.123.76 (talk) 14:43, 10 January 2008 (UTC)
The image has been removed
editIt seems like this page used to have an image from the episode. Has it been removed for copyright reasons? If so, should we remove the link to the image? TangoTheory 05:01, 1 March 2007 (UTC)
Fair use rationale for Image:Littlegirlinthebigten.jpg
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Fractals?
editThe article says the college girls have "fractals". Is this a typo of some kind, or a brand name? I haven't seen the episode, but fractals are computer graphics. 86.131.92.52 (talk) 13:24, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
One of the college girls is drawing fractals in her spare time. We can even see the images.
Cultural references: Bart references Underdog when he beats the bullies using Underdog rhyme and meter. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.124.116.101 (talk) 21:26, 14 March 2020 (UTC)
External link to a page that doesn't exist
editThe following links to a page that hasn't been created yet: ""Little Girl in the Big Ten episode capsule". The Simpsons Archive." Was the idea to just wait until linking to SNPP becomes relevant? Apoyon (talk) 17:41, 3 February 2010 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 comment! 16:41, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
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edit- There is one dead link
- Capitalize "chinese" and wikilink mosquito in lead
- Wikilink characters in lead and plot
- "Bart is infected with the "panda virus" and is put in a plastic bubble to prevent others from infection" Removed bolded
- Make more clear Jon Vitti pitched the episode's main plot (versus the sublot) in lead
- Lead needs ratings summary
- "That and her large head gives her perfect balance, Lisa passes with flying colors. " Awkward phrasing
- "Lisa finds herself looking more like a college student with a beret, which helps her fit in even more." Awkward phrasing (possible reword: Lisa begins to wear a beret to help her fit in better)?
- "Meanwhile, Bart gets bitten by a Chinese mosquito that was in his Krusty-saurus toy manufactured in a sweatshop with a communist Krusty logo, and becomes infected with "Panda virus"." Again, awkward phrasing
- "To prevent getting others from getting sick" Add bolded
- "Bart, in the meantime, gets used to his bubble, more popular, a thing of amusement for Homer as well." What?
- Indicate Jon Vitti is a producer
- Remember, place citations directly after sentences with direct quotations
- "On August 24, 2010, "Little Girl in the Big Ten" was released as part of The Simpsons: The Complete Thirteenth Season DVD and Blu-ray set. Al Jean, Ian Maxtone-Graham, Matt Selman, Tom Gammill, Max Pross and Robert Pinsky participated in the audio commentary of the episode." Needs ref
- Haven't seen the episode, but shouldn't the "superb Chumbawumba parody" be also mentioned in the cultural refs section?
I'll place the review on hold for seven days while my comments get looked at. Thanks, Ruby2010 comment! 17:12, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- I think I've addressed all the issues now. Thanks for the review! Queenieacoustic (talk) 17:42, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Looks good. Nice work, Ruby2010 comment! 19:14, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
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