Talk:Lip plumper

Latest comment: 12 years ago by 75.109.232.66 in topic Poor quality

Poor quality edit

This article reads, at the moment, too much like an advertisement for lip plumpers. Several times it emphasises the "benefits" of these products, going so far as to actually use the words "health-enhancing product". Also, it doesn't exactly explain how the said products work, or give examples of possible ingredients. The tone is far from encyclopaedic. Shadowcrow 03:17, 1 November 2007 (UTC)Reply

In fact, considering the unencyclopaedic tone and overall quality, I'm putting up the Wikipedia: Cleanup image. Shadowcrow 02:39, 5 November 2007 (UTC)Reply

I also seriously question the hyperlink used when talking about "natural" lip plumpers. It links directly to a particular brand's products, and feels a bit like blatant advertising. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.109.232.66 (talk) 06:40, 23 January 2012 (UTC)Reply