Talk:Lenox Library (New York City)/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by 3E1I5S8B9RF7 in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: 3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk · contribs) 11:22, 4 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • In the "Early History" chapter, reference no 1 claims: "He bought them and sold them to Mr. Lenox with a ten percent commission." I could not find this "10 percent" figure on pages 13 or 14, as cited in the reference.
added other page Eddie891 Talk Work 22:57, 4 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
Nope. I could not find the "ten percent commission" quote on page 60, neither.--3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk) 09:50, 5 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
Fixed page Eddie891 Talk Work 13:11, 5 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • Reference no. 3 does not give an exact page number or range in the book.
Added Eddie891 Talk Work 22:57, 4 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • In reference no 4, someone added "full citation needed". A full citation is not necessary, and thus needs to be removed from the source. The same goes for reference no 8.
changedEddie891 Talk Work 22:57, 4 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
In Reference 9, a link already exists. Eddie891 Talk Work 16:07, 4 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
It exists, all right, but I cannot verify any of the specific content that the article claims, because the link offers no search option. Do you have that journal at your disposal? Is there no other (online) source available for these claims?--3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk) 09:50, 5 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
It's google books. If you click "search in this book", and then type what you want to search, it'll search within the book. The URL is (as listed on the page) https://books.google.com/books?id=8j8DAAAAYAAJ&pg=PA200. Eddie891 Talk Work 13:11, 5 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

3E1I5S8B9RF7 I believe I have responded to all of your issues. Eddie891 Talk Work 13:11, 5 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

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I think the article meets the GA criteria. The issues have been resolved.--3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk) 13:33, 5 January 2018 (UTC)Reply