Talk:Lena Anthem/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 16:42, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

• Add the radio edit lenght and state the difference between both

 Done

Lead

• through Columbia and Sony Music → through Columbia and Sony Music via digital download and CD single
  • Removed the digital download thing altogheter, as they were not a thing back then. The digital version is just the CD single converted to digital outlets, I realized. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
• Mention Tim Norell

The sample is mentioned, I don't think he is that important. He is not credited on the CD single, just in the album credits. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

• The song also attained top-ten positions on the Svensktoppen and Trackslistan charts → remove (see below)
• You can mention a live performance or two
  • Added one. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

 Done

Background

• Seem fine.

Composition and lyrics

• Fine

Critical reception

• AllMusic → wikilink

Already linked in the section above. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

I missed it. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:55, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

Chart performance

• noted as "surprising" → why surprasing?

Removed. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

• The song charted in the top-ten for nine weeks → The song spent nine weeks in the top-ten

Done.

• "Lena Anthem" debuted at number five on the Svensktoppen chart on 28 November 2004, after being a contender the week before." → I wonder if this is relevant as a chart, it doesn't seem like. Secondly a conter for what?

A contender to enter the chart, it "bubbled under" in a way. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

• "The song also charted on Trackslistan, where it debuted and peaked at number seven" → same as previous, these are just radio charts for diferent stations, not relevant.

Both Svensktoppen and Trackslistan were considered by record labels to be highly important for Swedish-language singers back in the day. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

You should state that, along with the link. It's quite importat so there is a context and the reason why is not on the table below. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:57, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

Live performances

• Don't wikilink red links

Template:Interlanguage link multi creates a red link. Krogshow doesn't have an English equivalent. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

• There are some instances of Sweedenthat make hard to understand the meaning of the sentences. "f her 2011 krogshow [sv] Min drömshow – 25 år som artist" and "performed the song on her 2016 krogshow Jag är ingen älskling."

 Done

Track listing

• Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between the tracks and their lenght

 Done

Credits and personnel

• Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between the credits and the personnel

Done.

• Tim Norell → he received a songwriter credit

Revised in "Composition and lyrics", he received a music credit only. Swedish credits are usually split into music and lyrics, which are different components of songwriting. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

 Done

Charts

• Fine.

Release history

• Don't link the labels

 Done

References

• As per nominator below

External links

• Fine

Overall

• Don't address any comments until I say so.
  • Please note that Retriever Research appears to be having some technical difficulties atm. I don't know, the articles work fine when I'm logged in but the URLs seem to be off. I will try to fix it. Pancake (talk) 18:40, 10 April 2020 (UTC)
    • Yeah they work when logged in only due to copyright stuff. Added (subscription required) tags. Pancake (talk) 19:17, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

@PancakeMistake: I left you something on the Chart performance. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:02, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

Added info about the charts. Pancake (talk) 18:25, 12 April 2020 (UTC)