Talk:Lemonade (Alexandra Stan song)

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Cartoon network freak in topic GA Review
Good articleLemonade (Alexandra Stan song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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Article milestones
DateProcessResult
July 7, 2016Good article nomineeListed
January 26, 2017Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Lemonade (Alexandra Stan song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 12:06, 3 July 2016 (UTC)Reply


Hello, I'm MarioSoulTruthFan and I'll be reviewing this article over the course of the week. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:06, 3 July 2016 (UTC)Reply

Infobox

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  • Alt → Stan is portrayed posing (sounds terrible)
  • Label → "This field should refer to the label on which the single/album was originally released". You have like 5 labels!!

Lead

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  • recorded by Romanian recording → recorded by Romanian singer and songwriter
  • You should mention the release date in Japan since it was recorded for that re-issue album.
  • You should state that was compared to Britney's hold it against me or even Lady Gaga
  • Commercially, "Lemonade" was successful on several European record charts → Commercially, "Lemonade" was peaked on some European record charts
  • with it being → becoming a
  • by the Federation of the Italian Music Industry → by the Federation of the Italian Music Industry (FIMI)

Composition

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  • Move the sample here with and add a description.
  Fixed Moved sample.
  • They → who?

Critical reception

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  • music critics → Link music journalism

Music video

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  • "Still" → Shot
  • "Direct Lyrics later compared this outfit to gipsy culture" → remove "later"

Track listings

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  • Needs language parameter on the reference.
  Fixed Added language to each iTunes link.

Credits and personnel

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  • director → music video director. Is he really on the liner notes? Otherwise I would move it to the music video section.
  Fixed Removed the director's credit.
  • Mastering, mixing, recording? Stan for sure didn't do all of these by herself?
Added info for recording, but I couldn't find anything on mastering and mixing. Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:12, 7 July 2016 (UTC)Reply

Charts and certifications

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Weekly charts

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  • Fine

Year-end charts

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  • The peak is not on the given citation.
  Fixed Oh sorry, the position was no 64.

Certifications

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  • Fine

Release history

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  • Make a small prose regarding the release here.

Reference

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  • YouTube → noitalic
  • Link the first "iTunes Store"
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  • Remove the music video from the infobox and add it here.
  Fixed Moved music video.

Categories

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  • 2012 songs → should be after the 2012 singles

Overall GA review

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@Cartoon network freak: please hold until I comment on everything. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 10:56, 7 July 2016 (UTC)Reply

  • You need a commercial performance section! Have you forgot?

@Cartoon network freak: address the issues I have raised including the one above.

@MarioSoulTruthFan: All fixed; thanks for your review!! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:56, 7 July 2016 (UTC)Reply