Talk:Lemme See/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tomica (talk · contribs) 02:18, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

• There are not disambiguation links, however reference number 7 is dead. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 13:46, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done Removed and replaced reference.

Infobox

• Looks good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 13:48, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

Lead

• "Lemme See" is a song by American recording artist Usher, released on RCA Records, ---> "Lemme See" is a song by American recording artist Usher, released through RCA Records, — Tomíca^(T2ME) 13:53, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

• The track features vocals from rapper, Rick Ross. ---> The track features rapper verses from rapper, Rick Ross. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 13:53, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

I think the current wording sounds a bit better.

• It was released as a digital download on May 4, 2012, ---> It was digitally released on May 4, 2012, — Tomíca^(T2ME) 13:53, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

• You can add some info about the live performances in the lead.— Tomíca^(T2ME) 13:53, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

Background and release

• "Lemme See" was released as a digital download on May 4, 2012 ---> Same as lead. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:01, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

Composition and critical reception

• "Lemme See" is a mid-tempo R&B song that makes heavy use of synthesizers, ---> "Lemme See" is a mid-tempo R&B song that heavily incorporates synthesizers, — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:01, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

• [15][1][16][9] ---> Bad order of references, it should be chronologically, by numbers. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:01, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

• "Lemme See" received universally positive acclaim from ---> i think it's too biased to say universally, maybe just positive acclaim? — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:01, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

Chart performance

• It was knocked off the chart the proceeding week. ---> Sourced it please. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:06, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

• and is currently charted at number 71. ---> This needs clarifying. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:06, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done Removed.

• Currently, "Lemme See" is charted at number twelve on the latter chart. ---> Same as above. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:06, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done Removed.

Music video and live performances --->

• C/e it. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:17, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

Track listing

• Good now. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

Cool

Charts

• Looks good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

Release history

• Good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

References

• Ref 1. Misses author. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

• Ref 4. Link publisher. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

• Ref 5. Same as above. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

• Ref 6. Same. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

• Ref 11. Link publisher. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

• Ref 14. Publisher should be in brackets or {{cite news}} — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

• Ref 16. Same as above, just the The Guardian should be work and italicize. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

• Ref 21. Same as 14. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

• I see you are not using the {{cite web}} and the one for news, if you don't use them try to format the references well. Bad example: Youssef, Sobhi. Review: Looking 4 Myself Sputnik Music. Retrieved on 2012-06-18.

 Done Used Web and News template where appropriate; better formatted AllMusic ref.

• There is inconsistency in the dates and accessdates. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

• Some references miss accessdate. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done

• All in all the references are mess. Work on them! — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

 Done Should be good now.

External links

• It's good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Tom, i'll address these issues hopefully later today. Et3rnal 16:50, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

Take your time buddy. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 17:15, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

I think I've addressed all the issues. Et3rnal 02:14, 25 November 2012 (UTC)