Talk:Leleiohoku II/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Iazyges in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:15, 1 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:15, 1 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a  Y
    1.b  Y
  • 2
    2.a  Y
    2.b  Y
    2.c  Y
    2.d  Y
  • 3
    3.a  Y
    3.b  Y
  • 4
    4.a  Y
  • 5
    5.a  Y
  • 6
    6.a  Y
    6.b  Y
  • No DAB links  Y
  • No dead links  Y
  • No missing citations  Y

Prose Suggestions

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Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

  • Some of his other classmates included Samuel Nowlein and Robert Hoapili Baker, both of whom were politicians in later life suggest:
    Some of his other classmates included Samuel Nowlein and Robert Hoapili Baker, who both became politicians later in their lives.
  • American and British troops were landed with the permission of the Hawaiian government, and the rioters were arrested. may want to mention the source of these troops (presumably a nearby fort).