Talk:Lebanon at the 1952 Winter Olympics

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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:19, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

Will review this one. MWright96 (talk) 18:19, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Background

• "The Lebanese Olympic Committee was recognized by" - recognised

Alpine skiing

• "the second of his four Olympic consecutive Olympic appearances." - remove the first mention of the word "Olympic" to avoid the unncessary reptition in that sentence
• "which ranked him 57th out of 72 competitors who finished the race." - finishing competitors.
• "with Othmar Schneider taking silver" - winning the silver
• Maybe add the "scope=col" field to the columns in the data table per MOS:DTT?

References

• The archive date in Reference 1 should be in the YYYY-MM-DD format to maintain consistency

Nice work on this article. Not too much work that needs to be undertaken. MWright96 (talk) 19:27, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

• Thanks for another review, MWright96, everything has been addressed. Courcelles (talk) 15:40, 29 November 2018 (UTC)
  • @Courcelles: Nice. Can now promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 16:10, 29 November 2018 (UTC)