Talk:Last Man Standing season 8/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by TheTVExpert in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:23, 3 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

Basic stuff and comments

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  • "Promotional poster" → "Promotional poster for the season"
  • Add a comma after "January 2, 2020".
  • A reference is needed for Jet Jurgensmeyer returning to the series. If one is found, add the fact to #Casting.
  • Couldn't find any issues with #Cast.
  • "with her first, like" → "with her first like"
  • "Chuck is all for it, but" → "Chuck is all for it but"
  • "Vanessa, and has a great" → "Vanessa and has a great"
  • "she can stop snoring, but" → "she can stop snoring but"
  • "Ed, Chuck and others" → "Ed, Chuck, and others"
  • "because he's lonely" → "that he's lonely"
  • "Chuck, Kyle, Mandy, Kristin and Ryan" → "Chuck, Kyle, Mandy, Kristin, and Ryan"
  • "take up sides" → "take sides"
  • "out of the race, but" → "out of the race but"
  • "This irritates Kyle, and" → "This irritates Kyle and"
  • "Vanessa, Mandy, Kristin and Jen" → "Vanessa, Mandy, Kristin, and Jen"
  • "a rude waiter at lunch, and" → "a rude waiter at lunch and"
  • "that season would" → "that the season would"
  • Move the first reference after Thursday Night Football to after WWE SmackDown.
  • The use of "it was revealed" seems repetitive. Try changing it to something else.
  • "On December 22, 2019" → "The following day"
  • The reference for "Yours, Wine, and Ours" seems to have a small typo that made the citation be in italics.
  • 3.646 Archived 2020-02-21 at the Wayback Machine rounds up to 3.65, not 3.64. Change the number both in #Episodes and #Viewing figures.
  • The "DVR 18-49" digit for "Baked Sale" should be 0.5, not 0.4, and the "total viewers" should be 5.93, not 5.92.
  • The "Total (18-49)" digit for "Chili Chili Bang Bang" should be 1.3, not 1.4.
  • The "total viewers" for "Keep the Change" should be 5.85, not 5.84.
  • The "DVR 18-49" digit for "The Big LeBaxter" should be 0.3, not 0.4.
  • The "DVR 18-49" digit for "How You Like Them Pancakes?" should be 0.4, not 0.3.

Overview

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Notes

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No need to ping anymore, I have seen your edit and have passed the article. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 22:03, 3 February 2021 (UTC)Reply
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Sounds good. Thanks again for reviewing it. TheTVExpert (talk) 22:14, 3 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

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