Talk:Land of the Lustrous (TV series)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contribs) 00:21, 10 May 2018 (UTC)

Will be doing this, may take up to a week due to real-life matters. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 00:21, 10 May 2018 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   The premise/synopsis section seems too short. I'm aware there's a plot section in the main series article, but perhaps at least an overview of the series' events could be added here. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 02:31, 18 May 2018 (UTC)

   @Narutolovehinata5: Per MOS:TVPLOT, an article should not both contain a prose summary of the plot and a table of episode summaries. Basically, if the episode list were to be spun out into its own article (which might happen if the show gets renewed for a second season), then yes, the plot section should be expanded, but as it is right now it should not.--Alexandra IDV^talk 06:26, 18 May 2018 (UTC)

Noted. Though if the series' episode list is split off, please make sure to write a more detailed synopsis. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 02:20, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

Yes, of course.--Alexandra IDV^talk 06:05, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

2. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   Really appreciate the discussion of Japanese reception here, particularly on the awards it won. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 02:31, 18 May 2018 (UTC)

3. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

   See above. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 02:31, 18 May 2018 (UTC)

4. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

5. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

6. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   Once the issue with the premise section is resolved, this will be a pass. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 02:31, 18 May 2018 (UTC)

There are no more outstanding issues, so this is now a pass. Good work as always. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 02:20, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

Thank you!--Alexandra IDV^talk 06:05, 21 May 2018 (UTC)