Talk:Lactarius alnicola/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Ucucha in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Ucucha 18:25, 14 July 2010 (UTC)Reply

  • Can you make the etymology a little more explicit? (I.e., say that Alnus = alder and cola = inhabitant).
  • "Cap martin (edge of the cap)"—is the gloss necessary?
  • Probably not, but I was asked to gloss it once before, and have been glossing ever since. I'll try unglossing for this one and see what happens. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)Reply
  • "with matted fibrils beneath the gluten near the margin"—please explain
  • "central and Californian population"—don't you mean "central Californian"?
  • "slowly stains pale yellow"—when? Does it become yellow in maturity or when you do something to the fungus?
  • "nominate subspecies"—wouldn't that be the nominate variety?
  • So how can we distinguish it from Catharellus cibarius?
  • My last geography class was in grade 8. It's obvious sometimes. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)Reply
  • Should the lead mention that it may also form associations with non-conifers, like oaks and alders?
  • India is a big place, so I think you should mention the state. Are there no data on ecological associations there?
  • Added state, no other data at this time. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)Reply

Is this useful: Title: Russulaceous ectomycorrhizae of Abies lasiocarpa and Picea engelmannii Author(s): Kernaghan, G; Currah, RS; Bayer, RJ Source: CANADIAN JOURNAL OF BOTANY-REVUE CANADIENNE DE BOTANIQUE Volume: 75 Issue: 11 Pages: 1843-1850 Published: NOV 1997

Title: Additional new records on Lactarius from Mexico Author(s): Montoya, L; Bandala, VM Source: MYCOTAXON Volume: 57 Pages: 425-450 Published: JAN-MAR 1996

Ucucha 18:25, 14 July 2010 (UTC)Reply
  • Thanks for the excellent comments and quick review! Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)Reply
Thanks; I'm now passing the article. Ucucha 06:12, 15 July 2010 (UTC)Reply