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Hunter is described as an outside midfielder or wingman who can also play as a half-forward. His infobox lists his position as "Wingman / Forward". Should the infobox also include midfielder?
Done - Good pickup there, I've added that in. Doggo375 (talk) 22:30, 26 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
[65 point loss] --> "65-point loss" I think this is the conventional way to write it, based on a search of articles online. If you agree, I'd suggest doing ctrl+f and searching for "point", then putting hyphens in for the other instances of point margins being mentioned.
Done - I think that's the best way to go about it. Doggo375 (talk) 22:49, 26 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
[he quickly became a ball magnet] A bit informal for Wikipedia. How about "he quickly saw much more of the ball", or "he quickly became central to his team's efforts"?
[He also had good games in rounds 11 and 2] For clarity, I think this should be put in chronological order ("2 and 11"). Swap the disposal stats and the citations as well if you agree.
Done - Definitely agree with you on this one, I'm not quite sure what I was thinking at the time but it is confusing. Switched. Doggo375 (talk) 22:49, 26 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
[with drink-driving offences and personal issues pushing him out of the team, for a total of just 10 games]. Could cause confusion, as it sort of reads like he's pushed out of the team for 10 games, whereas I think the meaning is that he plays 10 games? How about, "... reducing him to a total of just 10 games..."?
Done - Another good find there, I didn't realise it could be read the other way when I first wrote that. Doggo375 (talk) 23:01, 26 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
[Hunter only vice-captained the Bulldogs' for one game] No possessive apostrophe for Bulldogs here.
[after pulling his jumper to the broadcast of the game when kicking a goal] A little hard to follow (though I understand what you're saying). Also, having taken a look at the video, it looks like the jumper-pulling followed the goal, so how about, "...after grabbing his Bulldogs jumper in celebration at kicking a goal..."?
That covers it - again, pretty minor fixes here. It's also worth noting that my limited knowledge of Australian Rules football might lead me to make mistakes. I'll await your response to the above.--Harper J. Cole (talk) 18:20, 26 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
@Harper J. Cole: Thanks very much for the quick review! Everything should be just about done, so let me know if there is anything else to fix up. Doggo375 (talk) 23:04, 26 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Looking good! I'll promote the article to GA status. Thanks again for the interesting read,--Harper J. Cole (talk) 23:39, 26 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
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