Talk:Kitchen Princess

GA Review

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Reviewer: DragonZero (talk · contribs) 04:47, 30 August 2013 (UTC)

Issues must be addressed to pass. Suggestions are suggestions DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 04:47, 30 August 2013 (UTC)

Issues

• "the substitute director" of what?
• Links to the Del Ray website do not work?
• The General source is not necessary or helpful. I'm assuming this is the lazy way of sourcing the plot, which do not necessarily require sources, through preferable.
• Ref 29 just links to the front page. You mean to link to the archive. It's date also needs to be formatted to match the rest of the article.

Suggestions

• Image is a bit big if it needs size restrictions (|230px) in the infobox.
• "| deadurl=no" for archived citewebs with non-dead links.
• I suggest removing the comma between a date range and the word "to". Ex January 30, 2007, to July 7, 2009. -> January 30, 2007 to July 7, 2009.

Hi DragonZero, and thank you for taking the time to review another article. :) I think I have now addressed all of your concerns, except the third issue. I definitely understand how you can see the "general sources" section as unhelpful. The "general sources" is used on an FA (School Rumble), though... and I feel that it might work as a happy middle between a citation for every sentence of the plot and no sources at all for the plot. On second thought, I don't care enough about this issue to argue for/against it. :) I'll just remove it, since it's important to you. Rapunzel-bellflower (talk) 00:37, 1 September 2013 (UTC)

• I'm unclear on suggestion #1; would you prefer that the image be further reduced?

• I respectfully disagree with suggestion #3; that, I think, would make it grammatically incorrect, according to this: (Paragraph 9) Perhaps I'm wrong? Commas are such evil things, aren't they? So many rules to remember... :)

Passing. Issues have been resolved. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 08:19, 1 September 2013 (UTC)

Characters...

I think Fujita, Hagio and Seiya are pretty important characters that should be included here, among others.. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.61.24.6 (talk) 22:49, 17 April 2011 (UTC)

Do not remove information from this article

Please do not remove information from this article. This is an encyclopedia. --Tony Sidaway 08:37, 10 December 2007 (UTC)

Recipes

Should there be a list of recipes in the article? yes71.139.193.189 (talk) 23:23, 29 May 2008 (UTC)sam hi71.139.193.189 (talk) 23:22, 29 May 2008 (UTC)bob

Will only be acceptable inside a chapter lists--KrebMarkt 21:44, 11 January 2009 (UTC)

Stuff

• http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/convention/2008/del-rey-manga Rapunzel-bellflower (talk) 22:28, 16 August 2013 (UTC)
• http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/news/2011-10-14/kodansha-usa-licenses-attack-on-titan-miles-edgeworth-manga
• http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/news/2012-10-26/new-york-times-manga-best-seller-list-october-14-20
• http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/gia-list/9-chefs-you-wish-your-local-diner-would-hire/2011-08-13
• http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/right-turn-only/2007-02-06 Rapunzel-bellflower (talk) 23:40, 16 August 2013 (UTC)
• http://www.mania.com/kitchen-princess-search-for-angel-cake-novel_article_118756.html Rapunzel-bellflower (talk) 18:22, 19 August 2013 (UTC)
• Ellingwood, Holly (September 18, 2008). "Kitchen Princess Vol. 7". activeAnime. Retrieved September 12, 2011.
• Polley, Dan. "Kitchen Princess v2". Manga Life. Archived from the original on May 29, 2007.
• Polley, Dan. "Kitchen Princess v3". Manga Life. Archived from the original on September 15, 2007.
• Polley, Dan (November 2007). "Kitchen Princess v4". Manga Life. Archived from the original on November 11, 2007. {{cite web}}: Check date values in: |date= (help); External link in |date= (help)

Rapunzel-bellflower (talk) 20:43, 21 August 2013 (UTC)

Removing template per deletion decision. – Allen4names (contributions) 17:03, 4 December 2016 (UTC)

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