Talk:Kirby's Adventure/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 21:11, 25 July 2018 (UTC)

I’ll take a look Courcelles (talk) 21:11, 25 July 2018 (UTC)

• ”The game consists of 41 levels across seven worlds”. Don’t use two number formats in a single sentence. Both are numerals or both are written out.
  • Done. JOEBRO64 22:47, 25 July 2018 (UTC)
• ”Nintendo Power thought the game was more difficult than the cuteness may lead gamers to believe.” seems at odds with the prior sentence?
  • OK I think I fixed it. The exact quote from NP is "The theme may be younger than the challenge." which they marked as a negative point. I interpreted this as the game being a fair challenge, but misleadingly marketed to young children, but that isn't necessarily the case. TarkusAB^talk 00:42, 26 July 2018 (UTC)

High quality article, well done. Courcelles (talk) 21:24, 25 July 2018 (UTC)

@Courcelles: I think Tarkus and I have resolved everything. Responded above. JOEBRO64 10:38, 26 July 2018 (UTC)

Everything looks good now, promoting. Courcelles (talk) 17:04, 26 July 2018 (UTC)