Talk:King's Colour Squadron

Latest comment: 1 year ago by RadioactiveBoulevardier in topic Clarify

Equal standard to Guards? edit

Standard equally as high as the guards division? That seems unlikely, please provide a reliable citation for this before reverting, and I don't mean the RAF website, thanks. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 81.156.39.125 (talk) 11:41, 1 September 2008 (UTC)Reply

Clarify edit

RadioactiveBoulevardier, you added a Clarify tag to the article. It is common practice to either post on the talk page, or write within the curly brackets what the exact problem is that you want addressing. At the moment, to me, it makes sense, so I cannot see what you are getting at. Thanks and regards. The joy of all things (talk) The joy of all things (talk) 21:33, 12 September 2022 (UTC)Reply

The word "those" is too ambiguous, and not grammatically/syntactically correct. I don't know what phrase needs to replace it so I left a clarify tag. RadioactiveBoulevardier (talk) 21:36, 12 September 2022 (UTC)Reply
RadioactiveBoulevardier well how about Alongside members of the ship's company from HMS Illustrious, and soldiers of the Black Watch, 12 serving members of the QCS were the last military presence in Hong Kong before it was handed back in 1997.? The joy of all things (talk) 21:40, 12 September 2022 (UTC)Reply
That works, but still a bit vague. RadioactiveBoulevardier (talk) 05:36, 13 September 2022 (UTC)Reply