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Two points:
1. 'he recorded best seller in his branch office'
What does this quote mean ? To Europeans a 'bestseller' is a type of successful book. I would change it if I knew what the original author of the article meant.
2. How can his ' playing position' (see box) be 'Manager' ? I would change it to 'position' if I knew how.