Talk:Killing of Eyad al-Hallaq

Latest comment: 1 year ago by 47.188.13.27 in topic Am I allowed to do this?


Name Spelling?

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What's the reasoning for preferring this particular spelling of his name? Obviously, the original spelling is in Arabic... Is there a standardized way to translate it to English? If so, can we use that and reference it? Chaoticidealism (talk) 23:30, 13 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Where have all the other key pieces of information of this story gone?

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I find this article in it's current form tailored towards damage control more than presenting a neutral view of what has transpired. Unfortunately I can't edit it as it's subject to the 500/30 rule. But to other editors out there, here are some missing key elements from the article:-

  • There is no mention of the testimonial of the care giver who witnessed Hallaq's murder attesting the man was shot from close range while lying injured and trapped in the garbage room even as she -the caregiver- screamed at the border police in Hebrew and Arabic that he is a disabled man.


  • There is no mention of the police seemingly working to block the release of the video recordings of the incident or the chase. This is important to counter the claims that a "rookie shooter" thought he was in real danger while -of course- chasing and shooting at the autistic man for several minutes.


  • There is no mention that the area where the incident took place is in East Jerusalem an area considered by the international community to be occupied by Israel since the end of the 1967 war and subject to "continuing systematic human right violations of the Palestinian people". It's important to highlight this incident as not an exception to the rule but as one part of a long sequence of incidents and link to other Wikipedia articles on the subject.


  • There is no photo of the victim or his family or any of the protests that happened on the Palestinian side


  • There is not a single reference from a Palestinian or Arab media


I am not looking for emotive additions, just documenting neutrally the details of this incident. And I am reaching out to all editors even the ones who are pro Israel to help out. Why would you not want to document these incidents as they happened. Perhaps if we have done a better job with previous incidents like this one this tragedy as the Prime minister of Israel called it wouldn't have happened.

MYS1979 (talk) 17:24, 24 June 2020 (UTC)Reply


Thanks for raising your concerns here, MYS1979. Apart from (not) mentioning East Jerusalem, it struck me that what we have doesn’t match the source, so I've split that discussion out to a separate section below. Pelagicmessages ) Z – (21:08 Thu 25, AEST) 11:08, 25 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Thank you Z. You have raised a second important discrepancy from the source about the location that I didn't catch. The first of course was the description of the shots as "warning shots" which the source didn't state. I am familiar with Jerusalem and I know that the old city -where the Golden Dome, the holy church of sepulcher and the western wall are at - are all part of East Jerusalem and considered to be a Palestinian territory occupied by Israel since the 1967 war. This is not my opinion this is the opinion of every country in this world except Israel, rulings of the international court of justice about the legality of the separation wall, and various UN assembly and council resolutions state that. Even the supreme court in the US in Zivotofsky v. Kerry supported the American government in denying an Israeli/American couple of putting Jerusalem/Israel on the passport of their newly Jerusalem born baby. But most people out there don't know that and you are not an exception to the rule. I mean when was the last time you saw a major publication or news media outlet mentioning that? Why such a profound piece of information is not known to many many people out there? Let's find comfort that we at least can have the ability to to document what we know as neutral observers. We are not here to correct the wrongs in this world but at least we will be of clear conscious documenting these moments of history for the next generations to come.

MYS1979 (talk) 15:14, 25 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Locations involved

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The article currently has The checkpoint was part of the daily walk from Halaq's home in Jerusalem's Wadi al-Joz area in the Old City to the center which he had attended since 2014. This gives the incorrect impression that his home was inside the old city and leaves the reader wondering where the school is.

But the source cited says Early on Saturday morning in the Wadi el-Joz neighbourhood of occupied East Jerusalem, he sipped tea made by his mother Rana … The family home is just a 10-minute walk from the Old City … he walked with his teacher towards the Elwyn Al-Quds school, close to the Al-Aqsa mosque compound …

For a minimal change, we could flip "in the Old City to the center" → "to the school in the Old City".

Our own (i.e. en-wp) articles say that Wadi al-Joz and Old City (Jerusalem) are in East Jerusalem, so using that term here should be uncontroversial. (For what it’s worth, I didn't know that about the Old City before today.) If editors want to fight each other over that, then go nuts. Perhaps in this case instead of BRD we could DBDRD…etc. – note that I’ve started with this D.

I am aware of discretionary sanctions for this topic; so no need to template my talk page, consider me already informed. Pelagicmessages ) Z – (20:53 Thu 25, AEST) 10:53, 25 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

For the record, I went ahead and made the change same day, diff. Pelagicmessages · Z ) – (20:30 Sat 25, AEST) 10:30, 25 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

Am I allowed to do this?

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Hi!, I won't use my favourite emoticon on this because it is a sad article, so my question is, can I include Wikiproject:Autism in this article's talk page? Or not?, I asked on the project's talk page but it's not seen as there are no responses to previous posts. Thank you very much I cherish you all. -CoryGlee (talk)

If it’s in scope for the project, then I can’t see why not, CoryGlee. Though if that project is inactive, doing so might not have much effect? Pelagicmessages · Z ) – (20:38 Sat 25, AEST) 10:38, 25 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

Now that the court has let the killer free coupled with the fact that this is not an isolated incident, I think you should. At least to help educate people not to confuse social awkwardness with hostility. Although Iyad in this case was fleeing the area scared for his life, chased down and shot. 47.188.13.27 (talk) 20:17, 19 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Renaming

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This article should be called "Killing of Eyad al-Hallaq" ImTheIP (talk) 13:14, 25 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

No, it shouldn't. The proper way to request renaming an article, for changes that might be controversial, is described at WP:RM. —BarrelProof (talk) 17:37, 4 September 2020 (UTC)Reply

Info is outdated

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I would like to add at the end of the section 'Investigation':

al-Hallaq's parents have petitioned the High Court of Justice to conclude the investigation of the case and put the two police officers involved on trial [1]. On October 21, 2020 Israeli prosecutors recommended that the police officer who shot and killed al-Hallaq be charged with manslaughter [2][3].

References

  1. ^ "Israeli cop who shot dead autistic Palestinian faces trial: 'He posed no danger'". Haaretz.com. Retrieved 2020-11-07.
  2. ^ "Adalah: Israel's move to charge cop who killed disabled Palestinian with reckless manslaughter - Adalah". www.adalah.org. Retrieved 2020-11-07.
  3. ^ Halbfinger, David M.; Rasgon, Adam (2020-10-21). "Manslaughter Charge Urged for Israeli Officer in Killing of Autistic Palestinian". The New York Times. ISSN 0362-4331. Retrieved 2020-11-07.
  Done BJackJS talk 20:42, 11 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

Why is this Extended Confirmed protected?

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I know that this is related to the Arab-israeli conflict, but there has been no edit war, and no vandalism. The Murder of George Floyd is only semi-protected, but it's far more famous then this, so I see no reason to do Extended Confirmed protected on this page. Crocusfleur (talk) 11:15, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

shooting of > killing of?

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This probably needs to be at Killing of, since the person wasn't just shot but killed, unless this is for some reason a common name. I'll circle back to see if there are objections. valereee (talk) 19:42, 20 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 6 July 2023

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Add information about the acquittal of the officer: On July 6, 2023, he was acquitted of all charges based on his argument that he fired in self-defense and reasonably believed that al-Hallaq was a terrorist attempting an attack.

https://www.haaretz.com/israel-news/2023-07-06/ty-article/.premium/israeli-officer-who-killed-autistic-palestinian-sentenced/00000189-2aba-da0e-a59b-abfbea850000 https://www.aljazeera.com/news/2023/7/6/israeli-court-acquits-officer-of-killing-autistic-palestinian-man AvrahamHerschel (talk) 15:58, 6 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

  Done Xan747 (talk) 16:29, 6 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Photo of Eyad's mother after killer Acquittal

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Name of officer

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Is there a reason to not name the officer involved: Elior Yakov https://www.richardsilverstein.com/2023/07/11/breaking-israeli-police-murderer-identified/?fbclid=IwAR27Mb2NjLe9s566GmckVaIrYy1U8lN6H-fpvdE7bnRkn8_goIBYm7Qro1g

Although Israeli media has a gag order on that, there is no reason to go along with this censorship here. Mcdruid (talk) 12:47, 13 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

https://www.richardsilverstein.com/2023/07/11/breaking-israeli-police-murderer-identified/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.26.139.164 (talk) 16:12, 14 July 2023 (UTC)Reply