Talk:Kid Crème

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Glintingspade in topic Wording

Wording

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The present wording in the article is more commonly associated with a fan site. The article needs verifiable sources and a more neutral tone. Thanks,

Derek R Bullamore (talk) 16:20, 30 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

I concur. I did some minor copy edits to this article, but the actual substance needs work. It still reads like an advertisement or promotional bio now, and lacks sources Glintingspade (talk) 21:21, 13 September 2023 (UTC)Reply