Talk:Khadeen Carrington/GA1
Latest comment: 5 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:27, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 16:27, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead edit
- "He competed in college basketball for Seton Hall. The son of Reynold Carrington, a former professional soccer player and coach, Khadeen starred at Bishop Loughlin Memorial High School in Brooklyn, New York. " - reword this section to The son of former professional soccer player and coach Reynold Carrington, he competed in college basketball for Seton Hall Pirates and later starred at Bishop Loughlin Memorial High School in Brooklyn, New York.
- "As a senior, he led the CHSAA's" - write out the full name of the CHSAA and put the acroynms in parentheses
- "and was named the Brooklyn boys player of the year by the New York Daily News." - Brookyn Boys' Player of the Year by New York Daily News.
Early life and high school career edit
- Italize New York Post since it's a published print source
- "Carrington competed in AAU play with the New York Lightning" - AAU should be spelt out as Amateur Athletic Union and wikilinked
- "He was named the Brooklyn boys player of the year by the New York Daily News." - Same issue as the third one in the lead section
- Catholic High School Athletic Association Player should be moved to the first time its acroynms are mentioned and all other mentions thereafter should be written out as acroynms
- State who Kevin Willard is
College career edit
- "Carrington was able to flash his potential" - demonstrate
- "from the field and 38.2 percent from 3-point range." - three-point range
- "In the NCAA tournament loss against Arkansas," - wikilink NCAA Tournament to 2017 NCAA Division I Men's Basketball Tournament
- "Carrington led the Pirates to their first NCAA Tournament victory" - link NCAA tournament to 2018 NCAA Division I Men's Basketball Tournament
References edit
- New York Post in Ref 1 should be in the newspaper field and not the publisher one
- Ref 8 is missing the date it was published
Right, that is all of the nibbles from me. This review will be put on hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 18:57, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
- @Editorofthewiki: Since all of my queries have been addressed, this article can now attain the rank of GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:54, 9 June 2018 (UTC)