Talk:Kevin Lokko/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:37, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Merge first two paras.
• Then instead of "Lokko began his... " -> "He began...
• National League is overlinked.
• "Cup winning" -> "Cup-winning". In both places.
• "became captain at " link for captain?
• "Eaton College" where?
• "After being released by Norwich" reptitive.
• "header" link.
• "what would serve as " what was.
• "injury-time" link.
• "the National League on a season" overlinked.
• "Man of the Match" link.
• "with Stevenage chairman" their chairman.
• Link substitute on the first instance (back in the Early career section).
• Do we have a link for "loan"?
• "clean sheets" link.
• "the COVID-19 pandemic" go for the "in the United Kingdom" article here.
• Link manager on its first instance.
• "non-League" link.
• "Described as" by whom?

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:41, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing the article @The Rambling Man: I have made all of the above changes as you've suggested. Cheers. SBFCEdit (talk) 22:34, 5 September 2021 (UTC)