Talk:Kenneth Mayhew/GA1
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Taketa in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (talk · contribs) 14:16, 17 February 2015 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well-written.
- a (prose): b MoS:
- Get rid of pipe link to Suffolk County Cricket Club
- Instead of putting parentheses around location of places, just put "in (or at) _______"
- If he was a "temporary" major, point that out in the lead section (it just said "major")
- What is the section "Literature" about?
- Should move to Kenneth G. Mayhew (because there is a person named Kenneth E. Mayhew)
- No need to link articles in the "See Also" section that have been already linked in the article (for why see WP:OVERLINK)
- No need to link Sword beach, Normandy landings, Operation Charnwood, Operation Market Garden, Wageningen, and Military William Order multiple times.
- Double link to Queen Williamtha of Netherlands.
- One time in the text and one time in the quotation. I think that is acceptable and can be seen as part of the exception rules to overlinking.
- Replace BA and MA with the full name, as it can get confusing to some readers.
- Double link to Suffolk Regiment, and Venray
- a (prose): b MoS:
- It is factually accurate and verifiable
- It is broad in its coverage
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- If there is anything else about his early life, include it.
- What were "his injuries"?
- What was his father's name?
- What did he do from 1940–1942?
- What was his daughter's and grandson's names?
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- More comments later.Tomandjerry211 (talk) 19:33, 17 February 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you for the feedback, let me know if there are any more things I can help with. I will check back later today and make changes according to the input. All the best, Taketa (talk) 06:40, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
- Passing, well done.Tomandjerry211 (talk) 12:47, 22 February 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you for the feedback, let me know if there are any more things I can help with. I will check back later today and make changes according to the input. All the best, Taketa (talk) 06:40, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
- More comments later.Tomandjerry211 (talk) 19:33, 17 February 2015 (UTC)