Talk:Kelly Layne

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Mo5086a

This article has a lot of information regarding Kelly Layne. The career section is well developed, as well as the honors section, and the names of her horses. The creator of this page used a wide variety of different references. This article is clearly neutral. I also appreciate the quotes used throughout the article.

I think that this page needs to have more hyperlinks in the body of the article. While there were some hyperlinks, there is an opportunity for more. Through adding more hyperlinks, readers of this article will be able to more fulling understand the topic of the article if they are not familiar with it. I think that another improvement could be adding another photo to the article because this person is still alive.

Overall, I think that its a great article

Mo5086a (talk) 20:23, 21 March 2017 (UTC)Reply