Talk:Keiye Miranda

Comments from ParaSaCompart

Hello, you should make a table for her Educational Attainment, Work Experiences, Solo Exhibitions and Group Exhibitions, because it is hard to read.

helloooo

hello, there were a lot of details but was hard to read.Yellybelly (talk) 00:22, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Rrrrraymond

Hello Wieluxx, I have read your sandbox and I found it good. My suggestion is that you sort out the exhibitions so that it can be easier to read. Rrrrraymond (talk) 00:58, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Zerondar

Informative article but I have to agree with ParaSaCompart, you need to arrange those things to avoid complication and confusion. Zerondar (talk) 01:01, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Hugocfad666

Your sandbox is so fine, to say something, though I think you should pay attention to comments before mine. Hugocfad666 (talk) 01:03, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Comments regarding your sandbox article

Hello Wieluxx, here are my comments regarding your article about Katrina M.:

I suggest writing the content under the "Educational Attainment", "Solo Exhibitions", and "Group Exhibitions" subsections in numerical form, list form, or tabular form as they are difficult to read. Furthermore, I suggest reading the guidelines for referencing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Referencing_for_beginners as you were not able to cite your sources properly. You should also add more sources as there is only one link in your "References" subsection.

Renee1483 (talk) 01:09, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Bolero24

Hi, I've already ready your sandbox and it was a very informative article. Thank you Bolero24 (talk) 01:13, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Comments

The article is well organized. Keep up the good work! SupermanKael (talk) 01:25, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Comment

Hi Wieluxx. I checked your sandbox and your article has lots of information about the artist but it is quite hard to read, especially the Educational Attainment section. Minho12345 (talk) 01:29, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

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Hi! Please put some artworks of the artist. Thank you!--Kelly120913 (talk) 01:35, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Sandbox Comment

Hello. There were some errors on your work that may confuse other readers, such as the phrase "Keiye is the SON of...". Also for please clarify your information, because the verb tense you use is mostly past tense, I was confused particularly at the "Keiye was married to Wire Tuazon" which may mean something else. Thank you.
Anillaj (talk) 01:47, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Hi

Interesting page and informative.Ellasexygandara (talk) 01:55, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

GuatemalaRichmonde

Hello Wieluxx. I have read your sandbox. I suggest you cite more reference and make a table for Tuazon's exhibitions.

GuatemalaRichmonde (talk) 02:12, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Hello

I think you should cite some of her artworks for further informations. Kielloggs 02:19, 7 April 2015 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kielloggs (talk • contribs)

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I already check your article. It was fine. kindly all check mine (talk) 02:32, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

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the article seems fine. it has complete informations Ellieclang (talk) 02:34, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Wataru43

i like what you did to your sand box Wataru43 (talk) 02:48, 7 April 2015 (UTC)