Talk:Karl Bowman
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Potential References edit
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- ^ "A PSYCHIATRIC EVALUATION OF LAWS OF HOMOSEXUALITY". American Journal of Psychiatry. Retrieved 7/6/11.
{{cite web}}: Check date values in:|accessdate=(help) - ^ Bowman, K. M. (1959). "Sex and the Adolescent". California Medicine. 90 (4). PubMed Central: 311. PMC 1577643.
- ^ Bowman, K. M. (1939). "Modern Treatment of Schizophrenia". Bulletin of the New York Academy of Medicine. 15 (5): 338–353. PMC 1911385. PMID 19312108.
- ^ "Prolonged Post-Traumatic Syndromes Following Head Injury". American Journal of Psychiatry. Retrieved 7/6/11.
{{cite web}}: Check date values in:|accessdate=(help) - ^ "Drug Abuse, Alcohol Addiction". The Athlete.Org. Retrieved 7/6/11.
{{cite web}}: Check date values in:|accessdate=(help) - ^ "Psychiatric Aspects of Marihuana Intoxication". The UK Cannabis Internet Activist. Retrieved 7/6/11.
{{cite web}}: Check date values in:|accessdate=(help) - ^ Sexual Being Versus Governments That Promote Homosexuality. Sovereign Press. 1993. ISBN 0914752324.
Changes made and suggestions for improving article edit
I correct some capitalization, punctuation, and grammar errors as well as linked pages.
Under the Psychiatric Work heading, I think this sentence "Bowman was also a board member of the American Board of Psychiatry and Neurology." would make more sense in the paragraph above where it talks about everything Bowman was involved in.
Under the Schizophrenia heading, this sentence "This was executed by inducing a fever within the patients using various methods, such as the malaria virus." does not make sense, specifically the placement of "such as the malaria virus."
The lead section could use a little more information/summary of the article. Summarize what Bowman was most known for in the lead section.
In the references section there is a double citation, they just have different accessed dates. Also, either add unused, but helpful sources to the External Links section or delete it.