Talk:Kaname Harada/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 14:49, 31 December 2016 (UTC)

Will come back shortly. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 14:49, 31 December 2016 (UTC)

• Section 1.1;
  • A comma (,) after "After completing school"
  • the Imperial Japanese Navy's marine force; the navy itself is a marine force. Please reword to avoid confusion.
    • The term was referring to Marines, but the IJN didn't really have them - it had naval infantry, so I've tweaked this. Nick-D (talk) 22:22, 14 January 2017 (UTC)
  • during the first months of the war -> during the initial months of the war
    • Done Nick-D (talk) 22:22, 14 January 2017 (UTC)
• Infobox;
  • Mention date of his death.
    • It's there at present. Nick-D (talk) 22:22, 14 January 2017 (UTC)
• Section 2; all good.
• 15.3% violation
• No dab links found.
• External links check shows one dead link, fix it.
• All images are appropriately licensed.

Excellent job Nick. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 14:08, 3 January 2017 (UTC)

@Krishna Chaitanya Velaga: Sorry for my slow response; somehow I missed that you'd posted the review. I think that I've now addressed your comments. Nick-D (talk) 22:22, 14 January 2017 (UTC)

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 03:03, 15 January 2017 (UTC)