Talk:Kalthoum Bornaz

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): NourHalouani. Peer reviewers: Sarps95.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 23:34, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Sarps95 / Peer Review

This article is nicely written with a clear and coherent sentence structure. Sarps95 (talk) 22:29, 20 March 2016 (UTC) You have managed to have a strong lead section which easily helped me to understand the content of your article right away. There are couple small things that need attention and once you cover them, I think you are ready to go. Thinks I will state below will need some hyperlinks;

France Tunisia University of Paris III (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/University_of_Paris_III:_Sorbonne_Nouvelle) Claude Clabrol (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Claude_Chabrol) Roman Polanski(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Roman_Polanski) Randa Chahal Sabag (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Randa_Chahal_Sabag)

Tunisia Les Films de la Mouette (even though the page does not exist I would strongly reccommend you to create a hyper link so another person will understand whether this exists on Wikipedia or not if she/he wants write about it)

You can also create hyperlinks for your filmography section which will be really useful to signify whether they have a coverage on Wikipedia or not.

Your source section seems to be really rich, much better than mine but perhaps some external links URL links might be useful for your reader to research your screenwriter online.

You are in good shape, GOOD LUCK!!!

Suggestions

The Career section has a number of vague statements (that she worked with various directors, that she made her own films). Have your sources given you indications on titles that you could use to make more specific statements?

Reiterating the previous peer review: you should add hyperlinks (to the filmmakers, and if possible, to the film titles). E clark e100 (talk) 19:56, 25 March 2016 (UTC)

Source of birth date

https://books.google.ca/books?id=yv1BH5Wz-ekC&pg=PA384&lpg=PA384&dq=kalthoum+bornaz+august+24+1945&source=bl&ots=o_vxNkg2GD&sig=KRZ0x1_Voyhufmd9VeNAOF3eKzk&hl=fr&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjLmYn7q_POAhWLKx4KHVhFCMEQ6AEIJTAB#v=onepage&q=kalthoum%20bornaz%20august%2024%201945&f=false Thanks. --Danielvis08 (talk) 13:58, 3 September 2016 (UTC)

Assessed as B-class article

This article has been classified as a B-class article according to Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Assessment. Capitalistroadster (talk) 07:30, 4 September 2016 (UTC)