Talk:Kalanimoku

Latest comment: 7 years ago by 110.21.184.239 in topic Grammar

Needs much work

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This fragment of a sentence made no sense so I am taking it out:

Kalanimoku, function Hewahewa, the last high priest of the Paʻo lineage.

I suspect it was the result of some kind of cut-and-paste job on the source http://www.nps.gov/history/history/online_books/kona/history5a.htm ? This is an importaant figure, and this needs to be expanded. W Nowicki (talk) 04:02, 17 October 2009 (UTC)Reply

Grammar

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Similar is an adjective, so the phrase "functioned similar to" should be changed to "functioned similarly to" or restructured restructured in some other way. 110.21.184.239 (talk) 01:09, 27 December 2016 (UTC)Reply

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