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I think this page is not finished to write about basic information such as the etymology of Kakigōri, its historical background, how to make it. Also, this page don't differentiate well between Kakigōri and Shaved ice yet. In addition, I think this page mentions about Shirokuma too much despite Shirokuma is just one of the Kakigōri's brands. In my opinion, to be more fair to other brands, this page need to be added about more other's information.

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 14 January 2020 and 1 May 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): TanakaSho2.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 10:02, 18 January 2022 (UTC)Reply