Talk:Kae Miller

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Cielquiparle in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Cielquiparle (talk04:07, 28 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

 
Miller, 1980s

Improved to Good Article status by SusunW (talk), GRuban (talk), and Ipigott (talk). Nominated by SusunW (talk) at 16:00, 7 February 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Kae Miller; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Valereee (talk) 19:08, 9 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

  • Trying to just bulletproof this...I'm wondering if the hook may overstate what the article says? What sentence(s) in the article are directly stating that her support for people recovering from mental illness resulted in the establishment of the park? Valereee (talk) 19:49, 9 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for looking at it Valereee. IMO "In 1980, the Collaborative Housing Society reorganized as the View Road Park Society and began working on development of a park.[69] This organization lent money to develop the View Road South Headland Reserve, aiming to create a nature preserve, recreational green space, and sanctuary for recovery from mental illness".[59][35] (I need to flip the order of those refs.) I get that it's a wee bit confusing that when she was working on it, it was called the View Road Park/Reserve and now is the Te Rae Kaihau Park and Reserve, which is why I put the other ref above for the hook. If you don't concur, please ping me. I'm happy to discuss. SusunW (talk) 20:19, 9 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
If you think it's clear enough, I'll leave it to the promoter and mover-to-queue to disagree. I'll move it to spec occ once it's been moved to approved page. Valereee (talk) 20:35, 9 February 2023 (UTC)Reply


maladjusted children

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I tripped over this in the lead as an antiquated term, tried to track it down to see if I could maybe reword. I'm not finding this wording in the sections -- it says children's homes, is it somehow implied that a children's home is for children who are having mental or emotional health issues? Valereee (talk) 19:22, 9 February 2023 (UTC)Reply