Talk:Kaʻiminaʻauao/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Iazyges in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 03:22, 19 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 03:22, 19 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a  Y
    1.b  Y
  • 2
    2.a  Y
    2.b  Y
    2.c  Y
    2.d  Y
  • 3
    3.a  Y
    3.b  Y
  • 4
    4.a  Y
  • 5
    5.a  Y
  • 6
    6.a  Y
    6.b  Y
  • No DAB links  Y
  • No dead links  Y
  • No missing citations  Y

Prose Suggestions

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Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

  • May want to expand lead if possible, perhaps with info about her family.
  • She died of the measles at the age of three in an epidemic that killed more than 10,000 Native Hawaiians. suggest:
    She died of the measles at the age of three, during an epidemic of Measles, whooping cough and influenza that killed more than 10,000 Native Hawaiians.
  • Another relative of the family was the High Chiefess Kapiʻolani who plucked the ʻōhelo berries and openly defied the goddess Pele as a dramatic demonstration of her new faith in Christianity. this seems to imply that the ʻōhelo berries were sacred in some manner; would suggest explaining how they were sacred.
  • @KAVEBEAR: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:42, 23 August 2018 (UTC)Reply