Talk:K-170 (Kansas highway)/GA1

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Sammi Brie in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:58, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply


GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  

Overall:
Pass/Fail:  

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Copy changes edit

Bolded items indicate things likely worth fixing in other pages, since you have so many similar ones.

Lead edit

  • Add commas after north of Emporia and renumbered to K-99
  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

Route description edit

  • Add a comma after "farmlands" in flat rural farmlands and after about
  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Add "the" before "Neosho River"
  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Add a comma after After crossing Cable Creek
  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Commas after At this point and From this point
  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • two lane should be "two lanes"
  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Consolidate the two NHS sentences; does the definition need to be in every page if the term is wikilinked?
I agree, so I changed it a little, let me know if not ok -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

History edit

  • K-170 was commissioned as K-70 by 1930, to a highway — unclear what "to" indicates as a preposition here
not sure what to change it to? -420Traveler (talk) 04:54, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • three state should be hyphenated, maybe with a comma after
  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Comma after December 12, 1945 and October 23, 1946 (MOS:DATECOMMA). You can avoid excessive commas by switching "December 12, 1945, resolution," to "resolution on December 12, 1945,".
  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Merge the last two sentences
Should be fixed now. -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

Other notes edit

  • Use IABot to archive sources.
I'm not sure how to use the bot. -420Traveler (talk) 04:59, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:59, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • No images.
I checked flickr and there aren't any. Next month I will be travelling through the are and will take and add pictures. -420Traveler (talk) 04:59, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

@420Traveler: On hold. Not that much to change. Some of these are things you should consider for all your pages. Not going to go after the "US-XX" format for Kansas since that's a project standards issue as identified earlier. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 04:12, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

@Sammi Brie: Most issues are fixed, just had a couple questions. -420Traveler (talk) 04:59, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
420Traveler, the link to the bot is [1] — check the checkbox. You'll need to authenticate with your Wikipedia account. You can also do a list (say, all Kansas highways) at [2]. I made the other fix; let me know if that works. No images is fine, I was just noting it. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 05:12, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Sammi Brie, It looks good. Also thanks, I figured out how to use the bot. -420Traveler (talk) 05:31, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
It's ready, 420Traveler. Consider going through all your GAs and GANs and archiving the sources. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 16:02, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply