Talk:Justin Boren/GA1
Latest comment: 13 years ago by TonyTheTiger in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil (T • C • I love Wikipedia!) 03:42, 12 February 2011 (UTC)
- Honor roll is a disambiguation page.
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 23:11, 12 February 2011 (UTC)
- There's one dead link according to [1].
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:59, 13 February 2011 (UTC)
- Add a comma between "28" and "with" in "On October 28 with Riley still injured".
- Please spell NCAA out fully.in "the end of the NCAA-sanction".
- "In spring practice Boren impressed his coaches and teammates,[67][68] however he refused all interview requests." Shouldn't that be "During spring practice"? Replace the comma with a semi colon and add a comma after "however" instead.
- Hyphenate "second year".
- "Boren missed the October 31st". Please change the ordinal number to a cardinal no.
- Shouldn't the subheading "Personal" be "Personal life"?
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:35, 13 February 2011 (UTC)
- Is the subheading "College" really mean "Career"? I'm guessing that playing collage football is not a career, but a past-time, am I right? Please forgive my lack of knowledge about American football, since I live in Melbourne, Australia.
- I tried to change it to College career.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:39, 13 February 2011 (UTC)
- There's no alt text for the image files. See WP:ALT.
I'm satisfied with the writing. With a few minor changes, I'm happy to past this article. Sp33dyphil (T • C • I love Wikipedia!) 04:00, 12 February 2011 (UTC)