Talk:Jonah ibn Janah/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 16:35, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:35, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y (10.7% is highest, due to incidental mirror in some phrases.) 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links Y
• Images appropriately licensed Y
• I will be passing the review now, then adding prose suggestions at a later date. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:47, 1 March 2018 (UTC)

Prose Suggestions

• ibn Janah trained there under Isaac ibn Gikatilla and Isaac ibn Mar Saul before moving out around 1012 due to the city's sacking. suggest ibn Janah was mentored there by Isaac ibn Gikatilla and Isaac ibn Mar Saul, before he moved around 1012, due to the sacking of the city.
• Other than the medical profession, suggest Aside from his work in medicine,
• @HaEr48: That is all my comments. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 07:39, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

@Iazyges: Adopted your suggestions. Thanks for the review! HaEr48 (talk) 20:52, 6 March 2018 (UTC)