Talk:John Brombaugh
Latest comment: 17 years ago by Mdcollins1984 in topic Bits and pieces removed from article in copy edit
| This article must adhere to the biographies of living persons (BLP) policy, even if it is not a biography, because it contains material about living persons. Contentious material about living persons that is unsourced or poorly sourced must be removed immediately from the article and its talk page, especially if potentially libellous. If such material is repeatedly inserted, or if you have other concerns, please report the issue to this noticeboard.If you are a subject of this article, or acting on behalf of one, and you need help, please see this help page. |
 | This article is rated Start-class on Wikipedia's content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
| |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Bits and pieces removed from article in copy edit edit
I have attempted to copyedit and re-write some of the prose sections of this article. I have removed the following, that doesn't seem to fit, or need to be here.
- Specific details of degrees that mean nothing to a wider audience, and are largely unnecessary.
- External links to firm partners: "among them George K. Taylor, John H. Boody, Herman Greunke, Norman Ryan".
- I don't know what the rules are about external links of this type, but they could be deemed unnecessary and advertisement.
It is seldom necessary to include external links to anyone who doesn't have a Wikipedia article. If it is for specific people, unless they are notable enough for an article to be created, the reference in the text is probably trivial information that doesn't need to be included.
I hope these contributions prove useful to creating a good article. May I suggest that the contributions to organ building is re-written as prose style, rather than a list?