Talk:John Adams (drummer)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk · contribs) 13:00, 4 June 2012 (UTC)

Comments

• I've rephrased "claims" to "stated that", as "claims" implies uncertainty or a valid reason to disbelieve while statements are neutral.
• The source says he has four season tickets, of which the Indians pay for two. This contradicts the article which says the Indians pay for this ticket, but that he previously bought them himself.

Otherwise interesting and unusual article. Placing on hold until the issue has been resolved. Arsenikk ^(talk) 13:00, 4 June 2012 (UTC)

I hope I've fixed the issue. Thank you for your review. Bobnorwal (talk) 15:53, 5 June 2012 (UTC)

Congratulations with a good article. Nice work! Arsenikk ^(talk) 20:34, 5 June 2012 (UTC)