Talk:Johann Christian Ritter/GA1
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Buchraeumer in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: Buchraeumer (talk) 15:24, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
I am sorry to have to fail this article for the obvious reason that it is hardly more than a stub.
- Article consists only of lead, please read carefully WP:LEAD; Wikipedia:Article development might also be useful.
- Though the article has a few citations, statements like the one that an alternative birthplace may have been Hof an der Saale would still need a citation, for example.
- Some strange grammar and too few commas.
- Article content needs organizing. That he may have been born in Hof appears in the midst of material completely unrelated, for example.
- Article history: first edit summary was: "Created new page to change title, old page to be deleted", please MOVE articles in such cases, to preserve the article's editing history. WP:MOVE