Let's lose the gee-whizness of art articles edit

This article sounded as though it were written by a sophomore after his first trip to an art gallery. Really, don't be wordy and don't be too jocular. IF you are writing an encyclopedic article, kindly use neutral language appropriate to the subject.65.93.35.157 (talk) 22:57, 18 December 2012 (UTC)Reply

Note 4 Issue edit

Citation 4 seems to be self-referential. On the source article's citations, Wikipedia is listed as a source. Although the similarities to early Daguerreotypes are visually evident, it might still be a good idea to have a direct citation, perhaps from a gallery or past interview (possibly the 3rd note, if the article's source interviews can be located). — Preceding unsigned comment added by NuclearFantasies (talkcontribs) 15:24, 15 April 2014 (UTC)Reply

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at least two external links lead the user to websites which endanger the child-welfare. I didn't review this links intensive, but one of them showed naked bodies with separated heads. Another website showed warnings; but I didn't checked them. This was disturbing enough.

I advise, that one more experienced user review the links and complement them with written warnings or deletes them, if they break the laws.

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List of exhibitions removed from article that require sourcing edit

  • 1959: Group show at the Museum of Modern Art, NYC
  • 1981: Group show at San Francisco Museum of Modern Art
  • 1983: Exhibited in Kansas City Art Institute. Exhibited in Stedelijk Mus, Amsterdam.
  • 1985: Exhibited in San Francisco Museum of Modern Art. Group show at the Whitney Biennial
  • 1986: Exhibited in Brooklyn Museum. Group show at Palis de Tokyo, Paris
  • 1988: Exhibited in Centro de Arte Reina Sofia Museum, Madrid.
  • 1989: Exhibited in Palais de Tokyo, Paris.
  • 1991: Exhibited in Museum Of Modern Art Haifa, Israel
  • 1995: Exhibited in Guggenheim Museum, NYC. Exhibited in II Castello de Rivoli Museum., Turin
  • 1996: Exhibited in Rencontres de la Photograpie, Arles, France. Group show at La Photographie Contemporaine en France
  • 1997: Group show at Hayward Gallery, London
  • 1998: Exhibited in Museum of Fine Arts, Santa Fe. Group show at Strasbourg Museum of Modern and Contemporary Art
  • 1999: Group show at The Louvre, Paris
  • 2000: Group show at Musée Bourdelle, Paris. Group show at The High Mus. Art, Ga.,
  • 2002: Group show at National Gallery of Canada. Group show at The Israel Museum, Jerusalem. Group show at The Whitney Museum, NYC
  • 2004: Group show at National Gallery of Canada, Ottawa.
  • 2005: Exhibited in Moscow House of Photography. Group show at Guggenheim, Bilbao. Group show at Museum of Contemporary Photography, Chicago
  • 2007: Exhibited in The Invisible Landscape, National Gallery of Canada

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