Talk:Jody Deming

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Malthorp in topic Talk 2017

Talk 2017 edit

Looks good. I'd be really curious to read more about the arctic ice missions. Are there any wiki pages you could link to so I could read more about the missions? Cwlind1997 (talk) 17:45, 19 April 2017 (UTC)Reply

Looks like a legit wiki article! A few comments. It looks like you need a header for the page! You have "what" written twice in the Education section. I would add a few commas around the mention of NASA in the Research section. Good references! Drenniks (talk) 04:08, 20 April 2017 (UTC)Reply

This is looking excellent! You've really mastered the neutral voice needed for a wiki article, and the content thus for is very good. I'd like to see more content in the research section for the final edition, that's one section you can afford to add a lot of details. Malthorp (talk) 02:51, 24 April 2017 (UTC)Reply