Talk:Jewish-Palestinian Living Room Dialogue Group

First update

I have removed all of the subsections and links under ``Mainstream media attention. I believe this addresses the substance of the criticisms ``cleanup|reason=external links, unneeded/unencyclopedic sections, WP:NOTDIR, etc.|date=April 2013. I have also removed use of all bullet points, and pointed to the videos using external references, rather than inline text which I believe addresses ``external links|date=April 2013.

Second Update

Added internal links so no longer an orphan:

• http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nico_Smith#Anti-apartheid_activism
• http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beyond_War#Framework_for_a_Public_Peace_Process
• http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Montreal_Dialogue_Group#History_of_the_organization
• http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Neve_Shalom#History — Preceding unsigned comment added by BenjaminGittins (talk • contribs) 20:47, 5 May 2013 (UTC)

Layout

what else needs to be done to comply with layout guidelines? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dan-nl (talk • contribs) 02:18, 9 September 2013 (UTC) As work has been performed to improve the layout, and several months have passed sin Dan-nl has raised this question, and no one has raised any issues, I'm removing the layout warning from this page. Benjamin Gittins (talk) 21:03, 30 January 2014 (UTC)

Copying editing

what else needs to be done in order to comply with the copy editing guidelines? Dan-nl (talk) 13:04, 9 September 2013 (UTC) As work has been performed to improve the editing, and several months have passed sin Dan-nl has raised this question, and no one has raised any issues, I'm removing the layout warning from this page. Benjamin Gittins (talk) 21:03, 30 January 2014 (UTC)

External links

what else needs to be done in order to comply with the external links guidelines? Dan-nl (talk) 13:06, 9 September 2013 (UTC) As work has been performed to improve the links, and several months have passed sin Dan-nl has raised this question, and no one has raised any issues, I'm removing the layout warning from this page. Benjamin Gittins (talk) 21:03, 30 January 2014 (UTC)

=Citations

I see that one of the tags mentions "This article needs additional citations for verification. " but I don't see any citation requests in the article itself. What citations are needed? Thank youUnicorn46 (talk) 00:20, 18 May 2015 (UTC)

I would suggest that citations be added for any uncited text. --Epeefleche (talk) 03:02, 18 May 2015 (UTC)

I first would like to thank everyone who has helped to improve this article. As a relatively new editor, I have learned much from the process and hope to take that learning on to edit other articles and perhaps one day initiate one on my own. I would like to follow up on the tags that remain on the article to see if the sources and citations, which have been expanded considerably, meet the criteria to allow that tag to be removed. In addition, if there are no objections, I'd like to remove the layout tag as it seems to me that the current layout - thanks to the help of more experienced editors than I - has been improved and, it seems to me, with that improvement is within the guidelines applied to other articles. Unicorn46 (talk) 19:35, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

Because it has been 8 days since I posted the request that the tags be hidden for this article and because there has been no feed back objecting to the suggestion; I have been informed by an editor much more experienced than myself, that it is not inappropriate to hide the tags. I would also like to take this opportunity to thank everyone again who helped with improving this article.Unicorn46 (talk) 02:42, 1 August 2015 (UTC)

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