Talk:Jet Set Radio/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by ProtoDrake in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Namcokid47 (talk · contribs) 14:47, 8 November 2019 (UTC)Reply


Trying to clear out the GAN list at WP:VG. Namcokid47 (Contribs) 14:47, 8 November 2019 (UTC)Reply

@Namcokid47: Its been a week and a half. Just making sure you haven't forgotten about the GAN.Blue Pumpkin Pie (talk) 15:42, 19 November 2019 (UTC)Reply
Don't worry, I haven't forgotten about it :). I've just been busy with other articles for the time being. I'll try getting to this later today. Namcokid47 (Contribs) 17:34, 19 November 2019 (UTC)Reply
Sounds good. Take your time. i dont have a deadline.Blue Pumpkin Pie (talk) 18:09, 19 November 2019 (UTC)Reply
@Namcokid47: Just a friendly reminder for the GA nomination. No rush.Blue Pumpkin Pie (talk) 17:38, 4 December 2019 (UTC)Reply

From a cursory glance an issue I have with the article already is that much of it is not sourced, mainly with the gameplay and development. Some might find it redundant to do so, but I feel just about every sentence in those sections specifically need to end with a ref, as it helps satisfy WP:V and can easily be verified. Plus it can also help prevent vandalism from users adding a bunch of nonsense without a source, which makes it much easier to justify removing it. Namcokid47 (Contribs) 20:44, 7 December 2019 (UTC)Reply

i'm working on it now.Blue Pumpkin Pie Chat Contribs 16:16, 9 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
@Namcokid47: I believe i covered all the sentences in development and gameplay. let me know if i missed any.Blue Pumpkin Pie Chat Contribs 19:01, 9 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
@Namcokid47:—any additional comments? This review has been open a while now with no movement. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs talk 14:39, 3 January 2020 (UTC)Reply
@David Fuchs: Namcokid47 is currently reviewing Lumines: Puzzle Fusion and decided to review this one after. However, i dont oppose anyone who wants to lighten the work load.Blue Pumpkin Pie Chat Contribs 15:25, 3 January 2020 (UTC)Reply
Honestly, if somebody else is willing to take over the review, that's fine by me. Namcokid47 (Contribs) 03:09, 5 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

@Blue Pumpkin Pie:: I'll take this one, look over the sources, grammar and such. Expect a response by this coming weekend. --ProtoDrake (talk) 18:13, 15 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

@Blue Pumpkin Pie: I've had a look through the article. I've done a very little editing, but otherwise the article looks good to me. If anyone wants to make further edits, then please do. --ProtoDrake (talk) 17:11, 18 January 2020 (UTC)Reply