Talk:Jessica Hardy/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by YellowMonkey in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: YellowMonkey (vote in the Southern Stars and White Ferns supermodel photo poll) 05:16, 17 June 2010 (UTC) Sorry, no, this is nowhere near GA standardReply

  • Lead is one line
  • One line paragraphs
  • Sections are just stubby, doesn't say what times she did or who she beat or anything, or whether she improved or went backwards, just his placing.
  • Only medal winning races are given, why not the others as well?
  • Details of US qualification trials not given

YellowMonkey (vote in the Southern Stars and White Ferns supermodel photo poll) 05:16, 17 June 2010 (UTC)Reply