Talk:Jerry Finn/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Mike Christie in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 16:11, 23 December 2017 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 16:11, 23 December 2017 (UTC)
I've copyedited a little; please revert if necessary.
His body was cremated and his ashes were given to his family
is uncited.- I didn't understand the discussion of compression; is this referring to gain compression?
- There are some Harvard errors in the footnotes: 7, 17, and 18 don't link to the refs.
That's all I can see. If you plan to take this to FAC, I think the prose needs some polishing, but it's straightforward and concise enough for GA. Once these issues are fixed I will pass the article. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 16:54, 23 December 2017 (UTC)
- Hey thanks! This has been on the GA noms for a while so I'm thankful you got to it :) The cremation sentence wasn't added by me and as it's unsourced, I've removed it. I've addressed both of your other concerns, so we should be good to go! Thanks a lot :) Happy holidays! Saginaw-hitchhiker (talk) 23:34, 24 December 2017 (UTC)
- Fixes look good, so I'm passing this. Congratulations, and happy holidays to you too. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 13:44, 25 December 2017 (UTC)