Talk:Jerry's Painting/GA1
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Queenieacoustic in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Queenieacoustic (talk) 21:05, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
Will review this tomorrow. Queenieacoustic (talk) 21:05, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
Comments edit
Plot edit
- ...while thinking of about powerful women... Drop "of" or "about".
Production edit
- "Jerry's Painting" was written by Norm Hiscock and directed by Dean Holland. During its original broadcast, "Jerry's Painting" ran for... Start the second sentence with "the episode" instead.
- "Jerry's Painting" featured a guest appearance by Darlene Hunt as Marcia Langman, a member of the conservative group, the Society for Family Stability Foundation. Drop the second comma.
- Remember to write (pictured) after the name of the person in the picture.
Cultural references edit
- ...Andy and April instead start to purchase several "as seen on TV", including... Looks like a noun is missing after "as seen on TV", unless that is the noun?
Reception edit
- You should probably explain what the "ratings" and "shares" mean, for those who are not familiar with Nielsen ratings.
- Why Leslie Knope mentioned by full name in the middle of the section?
Lead edit
- ""Jerry's Painting" is the eleventh episode of the third season of the American comedy television series Parks and Recreation..." Write "Parks and Recreation's third season" instead.
With not much at all to complain about, this is overall a very well-written article. Just fix said issues and we've got ourselves another GA. I'll put it on hold for seven days so that the changes can be made. Queenieacoustic (talk) 09:08, 6 May 2011 (UTC)