Talk:Jermaine Samuels/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 09:18, 23 May 2020 (UTC)
Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 09:18, 23 May 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead edit
- The lead is on the short side. Please expand on his achievements thus far
High school career edit
- "He first dunked the ball at age 13." - think this sentence could be reworded to a more formal phrase
- "as well as playing AAU ball for Expressions Elite." - playing basketball in the Amateur Athletic Union for Expressions Elite.
- Rephrased
- Wikilink points per game, points and rebounds to their respective articles for those unfamiliar with basketball
- "he averaged 19 points per game for The Rivers School." - for Rivers School
- Italize USA Today since it is a printed newspaper
- "Samuels committed to Villanova in November 2016, " - committed to playing college basketball for
College career edit
- "He rejoined the rotation in February 2018 but struggled to play consistent minutes and did not play in NCAA Tournament victories" - think the text in bold can be worded differently so that it can be understood better
- "Samuels helped Villanova achieve a 26–10 record and win the Big East." - Big East Conference.
- Wikilink three-pointer to the relevant article for non-Basketball readers
National team career edit
- "In the summer of 2019" - please avoid using seasons per MOS:SEASON
- Changed to "July and August 2019"
- "Samuels was a part of the United States National team" - "National" doesn't need to begin with a capital letter
- "The team won bronze," - won the bronze medal,
- Wikilink Dominican Republic to Dominican Republic men's national basketball team
Career statistics: College edit
- Please add references to the college stats table to verify the information contained within it
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 10:12, 23 May 2020 (UTC)