Talk:Jerk De Soleil/GA1
Latest comment: 14 years ago by Pedro thy master in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Pedro J. the rookie 23:59, 12 November 2009 (UTC)
Okay P&F lets see....
Prose
- Dose it really have to say his stepbrother?
- It would be better if it would be something like Phineas, his stepbrother Ferb, and their friends Isabella, Baljeet, Buford, and Django have Plans to go to the cirq but are ruined by ... .
- Cirque do you mean circus?
- This one is a comment i do not now if you have to say who perry is i mean if some one is going to read it they must be familiared with the show.
- Dr Heinz Doofenshmirtz. Doofenshmirtz can you change it so that the name is not next to the other.
- remove high from world high.
- Same thing with jermy as with Perry
- gives candace not give
- What those don mean
Thats all.--Pedro J. the rookie 23:59, 12 November 2009 (UTC)
PASS..CONGRATS--Pedro J. the rookie 00:32, 13 November 2009 (UTC)